Hide and stink
Here I am sitting in a cramped, stinky old rubbish bin surrounded by everything I call junk. for example, last weeks meat now growing mold, the kittens kitty litter with unmentionables among it. Well why I'm hiding here, I'm playing hide 'n' seek with my brother Henk. Who wants to go near our rubbish bin? No one not even me!
"Henk can you go and put the rubbish out?'called mum from the house,
"Mum, me and sis are playing can't you see were both busy!'
"All right you to, but no more excuses you to!"
Oh no, please no this can't be happening to me, why me! Eek! light flooded into the bin, along with three other full, smelly rubbish bags and also whats left of dad's old socks. all of the junk fell, it all fell right on top of me and with the worst part, dads socks are in my mouth!
Now I feel sick, I'm moving side to side in a smelly rubbish bin, hand on I'm moving side to side? Oh no this day can't get any worse, it's rubbish day!
"Oh stink" I said and this time I mean it literally, but all that came out was,
"blah, blah!"
All the wobbling had stopped and the sound of Mum's foot steps slowly faded away in the distance.I can finally think, well I've got socks in my mouth and what feels like 100 tones of garbage on top of me. How am I going to get out of here?
The rubbish truck is now beside me, I think I'm going to die!
"I'm sorry Mum for stealing your lollies and putting them in my own secret lollie jar, and I'm sorry that I've been so mean to you Henk and...and;"
The bin is now off the ground; I'm done for, I close my eyes and hold my breath, Poof! Where am I? Oh yuck this place stinks, hang on I'm alive, but I'm alive in the rubbish truck! This is the last place I want to be!
I have been sitting here for already the rubbish is up to my waist, with fruit and veggie peelings and old crushed furniture! How am I going to get out of here?
"Oh my gosh"I exclaimed to my self as I pulled the old socks out of my mouth, over in the corner
their is a ripped rubbish bag with my favourite Adventure Barbie doll, we have done everything together even this. I climb over the rubbish towards her, their she is, I pick her up and look at her, her beautiful hair was now all mouldy and she had a broken leg.
'I have to get her back home" I exclaim "this isn't the end don't worry barbie!"
Still clutching Barbie I started to stack the rubbish bags in a tall pile, so high that it could reach the hole where all the rubbish goes in.
"Come on Barbie!' I exclaim,"we can do this, one, two, three!'' I jumped down onto the lawn outside number 66 just as the truck began to move.
Now all I have to do is run 12 houses down the street till I get too my own.
I start running, still holding Barbie, finally a reach my house.
"Anneke!"screamed Henk,"you are such a cheater, you went out of bounds and you even know that rule!I'm telling mum!"
"But, but" I stutter, "This is the worst hide I've ever played, at lest I have you Barbie, you've always been here for me."
"Anneke! Look at the state of you you're disgusting, you better have a good reason for all this!" shouted mum.
"OK I can explain, it started when we were playing hide and seek and th-"
"That's it, get in the shower. I've had enough with all your excuses." and with that mum snatched my priceless Barbie, went out onto to the verge and chucked her into the empty bin.
"NO!" I shouted, this is the worst hide 'n' seek game I've ever played and ever will, I will never play or even think about hide 'n' seek ever, ever again!
With that I stumbled down the drive way to the shower while thinking about what my Barbie, my adventure Barbie was going to go through next.
Welcome,
Hi my name is Anneke and I am a year six so their for it is my last year at school so I thourght a nice way to start of the year was by starting a 09 blog. My hobbies are dance, music, athletics and so many more things that are to do with that list.at school its been so cool I'm learning HEAPS and at the same time I am having so much fun! And in my after school activitys I'm do dance I do three types of dance 1.Ballet 2.Jazz and 3.contempory in total for the amount of dance I do per week is over 10 hours! Thats all for me,
Happy blogging :)
Happy blogging :)
Art
This term my class for art are making african masks. it is a long proccess becuase we have to paper mache 5 layers so the molds on the card board will come out affectivly. So far most people have started to form and paper mache the news paper on, but, some people are sill on their draft! luckily that isn't me anyway. For a long time we have been looking at african masks and they look really detailed and cleverly done all I hope is that ours turn out is good....
Below is one of the many pictures we looked at to give us inspration.
Below is one of the many pictures we looked at to give us inspration.
African mask
Rich task term 1
For rich task this term we are doing turangawaewae which means 'the place I stand.' We have to research about our family history,cultures, traditions etc.then at the end of the term we have to present this information by performing a speech. So for a school trip this term the teachers have organised for us to go to the thearte to watch a play! Every day I can't wait to get stuck back into work and find out so many things I have never learnt before.In my opinion I think this rich task is going to be a good one and so will be all the others through out the rest of my last year 6 primary year.
Writing
This term for writing we have the theme 'hide and seek.' We have to write about either the hider or the seeker and in our piece of writing we have to show the intro (beginning) middle (problem and resolution) and the end (conclusion) It's been really fun and when I'm finshed I might be able to post it up onto the blog!
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Hi, I'm Anneke the writer of this story. If you want you can give some feed back or some improments.
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No feedback needed. 10/10. Astonishing, Spontanious,Unbelievable. I always knew you were a good writer. Luckily both of us have that skill.
ReplyDeleteThanks for that comment Mathew thats really nice, I bet your writting is even better!!
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Not A Chance. Dont Try To Argue You Know Your The Best Writer In The syndicate
ReplyDeleteHi Anneke.It's me Alicia, I REALLY like your blog, i just wanted to tell u that i've got a blog as well and i just wanted u to see it, so can u plz take a look at it or poston it it's called: http://mycoolblog-alicias.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteThanks Alicia for that cool post and for having such a cool blog!!!
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Thanks Alicia for your posts, I hope mine on your blog comes in handy!!
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Thanks for posting on my blog!!! They really do come in handy!!!:) I really like your blog! I hope to see u soon in school!!!
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Hi Anneke!!! thnx for the tip on how to get the traffic thingy. If you'd like to visit my blog, plz go to: http://mycoolblog-alicias.blogspot.com/
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Hi Anneke, i've got the traffic feed thing, but i was just wondering how to get one of those cluster map things. Can u plz post the instructions on my blog.
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ReplyDeleteIt's me Anneke from room 18!!!